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Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

0 posted 2001-11-05 01:05 PM

One day blurrs into another
with no boundaries between,
the emptiness within me
swallowing all sensation,
numbness my state of being,
until I realize again
that your heart belongs to another,
and the ache that refuses to die
envelopes me,
leaving me feeling hopeless.

© 11/5/2001

"Those who would give up essential liberty to purchase a little temporary safety deserve neither liberty nor safety"
- Benjamin Franklin

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-11-05 04:52 PM

this tears at the heart....(((hugs)))

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 2001-11-05 08:42 PM

Sigh.

I understand that one...

K

JT
Member

since 2001-09-28

Posts 69
Arkansas, USA

3 posted 2001-11-05 10:04 PM

I understand it too. You did a good job putting words to a very difficult feeling.

Also, very timely Ben Franklin quote to have in your signature. With some of the stuff they're trying to cram down our throats now that quote speaks volumes.

JT

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-11-05 10:16 PM

I know this torment all too well.

You've expressed yourself very powerfully here - I really felt your words.

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

5 posted 2001-11-06 01:25 AM

A familar song, a sad song......

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2001-11-06 02:51 AM

A tune I've sung at least once. Well written, sadness of lost love.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 11-06-2001).]

Baroni
Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-11-07 11:20 AM

Ouch. I know the heartbreak of this. Well expressed, well written. Great piece.

Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are master of your fate and captain of your soul.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

8 posted 2001-11-08 01:02 PM

awe this is so sad, i know this song all too well--Great work!

LOVE ELMO

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

9 posted 2001-11-18 01:05 AM

Thank you all for the incredible comments and support. I apologize for taking so long to reply to all of you, but life has been a bit chaotic lately. Again, thank you for the kind words.

"Those who would give up essential liberty to purchase a little temporary safety deserve neither liberty nor safety"
- Benjamin Franklin

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2001-11-21 10:13 AM

THE VOICE OF MANY IN THESE WORDS MY FRIEND.
WELL DONE.

JWESLEY

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