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The woods

0 posted 2001-11-04 01:07 PM



TRUST

Thy name be fragile
A crystal vase,
such beauty
With flowers too
Orchids and roses,
picked by you
By your hand,
with gentle caress
Placed in this shelter,
of devotion
Balancing with blissful elegance,
on the table edge
Such fragrant fragility,
I sigh,
and marvel at its beauty
Like the breeze of spring
And the rain of fall
The wind blew,
and the vase fell

Such a sight,
for my sore eyes...

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
1 posted 2001-11-05 01:57 PM


Beautiful addition to your "distrust" piece..nicely done!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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since 2001-10-17
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the carpathians
2 posted 2001-11-11 12:51 PM


hmmm...this was so beautifully expressed,and such well chosen words,you expressions are fresh and to me very interesting. Good work!!

lida

Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar

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since 2001-07-22
Posts 99
North Carolina, USA
3 posted 2001-11-11 01:24 PM


Trust can indeed be a fragile thing.

Enjoyed,
James

Good cannot exist without evil.  Darkness I embrace.

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