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qtpieelmo
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0 posted 2001-11-02 08:54 AM


WHAT IS LOVE?

Is love any real?
Is it really no big deal?
Does it come from within?
Is it possible to heal?

@}--}--

Is it the flutter in my heart?
Brightness in the dark?
Laughter in my eyes?
A masterpiece of art?

@}--}--

Softness in your touch?
The need not to rush?
Sweetness in a smile?
Is it really all that much?

@}--}--

Lonely nights undone?
The game being won?
A fix all pill?
A special someone?

@}--}--

Whispers in my ear?
Life becoming clear?
Happiness all around?
Wishing you were near?

@}--}--

Can we all find,
two hearts to intertwine?
How will we know?
Can it really be defined?


LOVE ELMO

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qtpieelmo
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1 posted 2001-11-02 09:09 AM


Ok, I just came up with this 5min ago so criticism is Welcome  

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2 posted 2001-11-02 11:40 AM


Hmm...is this love!? I think everyone has a different view on what love "really is"...but this sounds quite like love...nice job!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

qtpieelmo
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3 posted 2001-11-02 11:54 AM


Yea, thanx! I believe that love is out there somewhere & I'm still desparately searching, I refuse to give up!   LOVE ELMO
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4 posted 2001-11-02 12:56 PM


You ask a very hard question here.  I think everyone has asked themselves this question at one time or another.  Even confusing it with lust or just needing another person's comfort.  In my opinion it is something only you can answer for yourself.  Just one of those things you can't tell another person what it is.  Well those are my thoughts  
Nicely done.

We are born into this world alone, and we will die alone.  It is what we do between those times that matters.  This is where we leave our mark.

Rosebud1229
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5 posted 2001-11-02 01:03 PM


wow!! what is love? love is not needing always to say I love you, but knowing, just knowing because your heart does  all the talking, and so much more, nice job.
qtpieelmo
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6 posted 2001-11-02 02:04 PM


Yea--Thanx to both of you for such great replies--I've been told once that I didn't know what love is so i came up with this, because there is no answer, its whatever you make it out to be!   LOVE ELMO

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JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-11-02 04:45 PM


I think love is genuinely caring for yourself and others...love is admiration and sharing...we can love ourselves and we can love others...it does become more complicated if we want to share love within a relationship because then both need to be willing to truly love the other...for if one wants a commitment and the other doesn't love will fail...James
qtpieelmo
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8 posted 2001-11-02 07:28 PM


Thanx James for replying, You are definatly right on there!   LOVE ELMO
Baroni
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9 posted 2001-11-03 07:18 PM


Well done... Love is indeed what we want it to be.  Each one of us must find our own version of what we want life to be.
qtpieelmo
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10 posted 2001-11-03 10:32 PM


Yeppers, I very much agree with that one, Thanx Baroni!   LOVE ELMO
LadyPeach1
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11 posted 2001-11-04 05:53 PM


WOW!   that was a really good poem!  ahhh.... what is l ve  ?  sometimes I wonder myself!  Its kinda confusing I'll tell you that!
LOL.  By the way you are a very pretty girl!
Love ya  
LadyPeach!  *ONCE AGAIN A JOB WELL DONE*
      

qtpieelmo
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12 posted 2001-11-04 05:59 PM


Thanx soo much lady peach!!--You put the biggest smile on my face!! That's a crappy pic-lol-   You r the greatest!!     LOVE ELMO

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