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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). 
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I am broken apart, a million pieces, bleeding heart. I see nothing, pins in eyes, blind to all things. I feel everything, leaking tired soul, silent screaming. I have tattered dress, once sweet violet, now soiled mess. I am so cold, scattered pieces alone, no hand to hold. I am forgotten toy, no peaceful grave, out lived my joy. "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
All I can say, is I feel just the same. Its not very easy to take, sometimes. But we always do. Good depiction of the feelings. Peace Sandra |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
If you ever feel like a forgotten toy, just remember that we care about you... and will always be waiting here. Very moving, very beautiful poem. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was really sad...the poem was awesome though...nice job! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA |
In a world such as this we are all forgotten toys at one time or another. Still.....that doesn't make it feel any better. Great job of conveying the feeling. This poem has a weight and it's carried atleast in some sense, in my opinion, by most if not all. We are born into this world alone, and we will die alone. It is what we do between those times that matters. This is where we leave our mark. |
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