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PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

0 posted 2001-10-28 10:39 PM

The scars...
   what do they tell?
   is it hell?

Do they portray nothing?
   or everything?

I need someone to care.

Am I able - can I bare?

Are you there?
   Please stop these tears!
   Please! I beg you!

My shoulders can’t take much more.
   Soon I’ll be no more.

10/6/01 & 10/11/01

        While I understand grief and rage, please know I don't recommend this. I'm just trying to show that someone relates and can understand. I’m a method actor, and I try my best to feel the pain of those my poetry is for.

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (edited 10-28-2001).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-11-11 08:04 PM

Yes scars reveal a time of pain and require a period of healing...not sure if you are revealing physical or emotional scarring...James

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-11-13 02:00 PM

Scars definately reveal pain and suffering...i think they tell alot and hold many stories

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

barbaraj
Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada

3 posted 2003-08-07 07:32 PM

scars revel what the bearer won't.. or can't. great job.

~bjw~

~To see the world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour.--> Blake~

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2003-08-07 10:14 PM

I think scarrs are cool. They make each person unique and everyone of them has a story behind it. They show what youve been through and what you can handle.

Nice Write.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

shytownboy
Junior Member

since 2003-08-06

Posts 14
Chicago

5 posted 2003-08-07 11:37 PM

Scars also won't let you forget. Physical or emotional. When you see those scars you are brought back to that place again.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

6 posted 2003-08-14 12:33 PM

scars are something most can't understand, forever there, always reminding...never fading, forever to haunt you and remind you till the end, but good write, adding this

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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