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alibaster
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In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2001-10-27 10:56 AM


Welcome, welcome, welcome...
to our world or darkness and despair!

Dance sweetly in the visions of our torment, so fair.
Sway gently in feathered masks to hide
the visions we seize deep inside.
Join us in our circus as we perform for the entire world to see
what imps wander thru the darkness playfully.

Welcome, welcome, welcome…
to our world of darkness and despair
as we bow and hope you enjoy your visit here.

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

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Baroni
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1 posted 2001-10-27 01:32 PM


Interesting.. You make the world of darkness sound so appealing... And yet, there is an underlying torment in it.  Wonderfully written.  

[This message has been edited by Baroni (edited 10-28-2001).]

Immortal Beloved
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the carpathians
2 posted 2001-10-27 09:02 PM


Reminds me of an Anne Rice mardi gras ball or an addams family waltz,yummy. I like it!!

lida

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3 posted 2001-10-28 11:02 PM


This should be the opening greeting for this room, Dear Affy. I love this.  

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

qtpieelmo
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4 posted 2001-11-01 09:51 PM


I really liked this one, It tells it all!   LOVE ELMO
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5 posted 2001-11-02 11:49 AM


OOOOOoooOOooOOooooOOO I LOVED THIS ONE!!!!!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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6 posted 2001-11-03 01:52 AM


This one is so cool! I've never read one done in this format before! Thanks for sharing!

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7 posted 2001-11-03 02:52 AM


What Sky said...

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (edited 11-03-2001).]

JT
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8 posted 2001-11-03 11:32 PM


Good job. And thanks for making me feel.....welcome here.

JT

LadyPeach1
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9 posted 2001-11-04 05:59 PM


HOOOOOOOOIEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!  That is cool ! kinda scary soundin!  !!!!!
Good job!
Peace  
LaDyPeAcH1
      


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