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Snowdwen
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 75
Louisiana

0 posted 2001-10-26 08:46 PM



Let me be your knight.. When times of shadows near. Let me be that shinning light that brightens thy day. Let me show you the way. Open the path let the light of the knight shine in.
Let me be that knight that guards thy life.. Thought the storming nights.
Let me hush those tears and clam thy fears; Let me show you the way.. Through those foggy nights, let the moon shine through.

"You live you learn and life moves on"



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Baroni
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since 2001-10-14
Posts 94
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2001-10-26 09:20 PM


Excellently done.  I enjoyed the basic message of the poem, and the medieval symbolism intertwined with darkness.  Well done!
Snowdwen
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 75
Louisiana
2 posted 2001-10-26 09:40 PM


Thank you Baroni!
I've always had this passion for medieval times. Sometimes it shows. Thank you for you kind words,
Snowie


"You live you learn and life moves on"



jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2001-10-28 10:03 PM


Nice my homestate friend...

jwesley

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