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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2001-10-26 02:18 PM


Tower of Darkness

Towers of Darkness hover over the lighed Sun,
Shadows trace the memories of happiness no more,
Twinkling stars now dim covered by the clouds,
Fog seeps into the graveyard,
Silence looms overcast spirits swallow up the night,
Dogs howl, show their fangs, but no fear,
The blood has no color,
Cementaries lifeless, yet living.
Weeds reach out looping the headstones,
Names cry out from the tomb,
absorbed in the fog.
Black cats screech,
Until shadows dance no more.

© Copyright 2001 Rose - All Rights Reserved
Immortal Beloved
Junior Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 42
the carpathians
1 posted 2001-10-27 12:50 PM


this was great!! i love the style,way spooky,good work!! I want to read more like this!!

ammelid¤

Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar

Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2001-10-27 12:34 PM


thank you so much, I do believe this time of the year got me going with Halloween being so close.
Baroni
Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2001-10-28 01:02 PM


Very frightening imagery, perfect for the season.  An entertaining read.  Well done!

Does the name pavlov ring a bell?

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2001-10-28 09:58 PM


Perfect, my friend, kept waiting for someone to jump out and holler TRICK OR TREAT!!!


jwesley

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