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allis4angel
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since 2001-04-10
Posts 82
Portugal

0 posted 2001-10-24 05:34 PM



Regrets?
Of course,
You were just my worst mistake
But why do you ask?
What for do you want to know?
So easy for you to judge me
With your professional way to do it
So easy for you to look at me
As your private case-study

Regrets?
Of course,
I gave you the keys so you could steal me
But why do you ask?
What have you done to help me?
So easy for you to deal with it
Being the goddess I turned you in
So easy for you to talk about it
Knowing I’m so weak now

Regrets?
Of course,
But what could I have done?

Regrets?
I don’t know,
I still love you



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cherish
Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
1 posted 2001-10-24 07:43 PM


wow....regrets in reading this?..none whatsoever. sumtimes you just cant figure out what you feel..loves tricky like that eh?
loved the format of this poem- very well suited to the way in which it was written. good job, i enjoyed this much!


         

"......",said the wise mute.

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