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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2001-10-22 07:14 PM


As all semblance of my life fades,
As I pull the last shreds and tatters of happiness
From wounded, load bearing shoulders,
I face such grim realities.

When your very foundations are taken from you,
When you gifts are discarded like unwanted trash,
When the leader fails to lead,
It seems I'm headed for a crash.

I do find peace and enlightenment within myself,
Within good friends and the like,
But such negatives only weigh me down,
I too can go on stike.

So my thoughts turn to fantasy,
I dream dreams that will never be reality,
I laugh, love, sing, learn and live,
Anything to ease such degenerate actuality.

I am currently living in a land of virtual make believe,
At least where love, dreams and hope reside,
I visit there albeit briefly,
A place free from darkness where I can hide.

It may not sound normal,
But it's a coping mechanism you see,
A place where everything turns out beautifully,
And my soul is finally free.

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2001-10-22 08:23 PM


Hi there old friend, I'm seeing in this poem, a lot of pain, and a lot of the way my life is too. And isn't that virtual dream world so much better than reality most of the time?
Take care.
Sandra

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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2 posted 2001-10-22 09:37 PM


Imagined realities are indeed better than unhappy ones.  Nice to see you again too, old friend  

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-10-23 03:39 AM


Enjoyed Isis...James
Sven
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4 posted 2001-10-23 07:03 PM


I've found that sometimes. . . we just need to escape. . .

but, we have to come back. . . and that's the test. . . well done my friend. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
5 posted 2001-10-23 10:01 PM


yes fantasy is sumtimes oh so much better then the real world. keep dreaming if it keeps you happy... good write isis


         

"......",said the wise mute.

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