Why is it that we prepare for war like precocious giants, and for peace like retarded pygmies.....
             Lester B. Pearson

                               "Images on a flat screen cannot convey emotion"

oh yes, i love your format too- very original. i can tell you put sum thought in the construction of it while you were writing. i think it suited the poem very well-good job baroni! i loved the way you ended the poem with the "not really" i think you finished it it off well- not many ppl are able to deliver good endings, but i think that you managed to do a good job of it  .thanks for sharing this- i loved the read

see the glass crack like a flower opening