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the_rescue
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0 posted 2001-10-17 12:57 PM



Listen to the night intensly as it screams
filled with terror and unsightly dreams
dreams that once filled a joyful heart
now dreams that rip men apart

The naked trees howl in the dying night
man is consumed with bitter fear and fright
drinking of the final cup of death
breathing his very last breath

inevitable death in just an hour or two
you'll find yourself swimming in the deep blue
see the pain in each man's eyes
hear the screams from his souls cries

it's found you it's bound you it consumes you from within
damned to confinement in your neverending sin
caught and entangled in a net of fear
know that your time is now drawing near

the dragon creeps slowly breathing on your back
nothing you can do fills the faith you lack
you fall down it's over your life does cease
left empty and cold longing for eternal peace



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Baroni
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1 posted 2001-10-17 02:59 PM


Hope the dragon stops soon.... And whatever pulls at your soul allows you some peace.  Masterfully written....
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2 posted 2001-10-18 01:50 PM


I hope that Whatever is burdoning u (is that how u spell it?? lol)lets up and gives u some room to take a nice deep breath...nice job

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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