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dolphin
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since 2001-10-16
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0 posted 2001-10-16 02:05 PM


He is gone
The pain, the sorrow
it does not equal the relief
I have my freedom
I have my space and peace of mind

He is gone
With tears in his eyes
he walked away when I asked him too
With a quiet sigh
I whispered "I'm sorry" as he left

He is gone
And now I know why
Why it took so long to ask him to go
I have happiness
But it cost me the love of my life

He is gone
and I wish he would come back



© Copyright 2001 Kristin F. - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2001-10-16 04:19 PM


Know these feelings of being trapped within a relationship...women have walked away from me requiring the joy of freedom...James
Baroni
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since 2001-10-14
Posts 94
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2001-10-16 04:42 PM


Excellent poem.... Hope you get over the hard times.  Remember that freedom always comes with a price.....  But usually, it's worth it...

Why is it that we prepare for war like precocious giants, and for peace like retarded pygmies.....
             Lester B. Pearson

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
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3 posted 2001-10-16 10:51 PM


This sounds familiar. In the past I've broken up with someone and afterwards decided I wanted them back. I have always found though, that in going back, I discover the same problems are there and I remember why I left in the first place.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2001-10-18 02:05 PM


What a confusing situation, i guess this  goes along with the saying.."you cant have your cake and eat it to"...but i never understood why...ugh..im sorry hun ::hugs::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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with you
5 posted 2001-10-18 08:50 PM


Welcome! this is so painful, a complete conflict of heart.... I'm sorry.   Please check your email for a special greeting  
qtpieelmo
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6 posted 2001-10-20 09:15 PM


Yea I definately know how this feels--great work & Welcome to DP, hope you find something here, i know i have!  

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (edited 10-20-2001).]

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