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0 posted 2001-10-15 11:56 AM



Reliving the memory,
Each and every day.
Cant get the pain to subside,
The ache wont go away.
Nervousness engulfs me,
Can never move on to tomorrow,
Always stuck in yesterday,
Its heart ache and its sorrow.

© Copyright 2001 Michele - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-15 05:50 PM


Reminds me of a situation I went through...of course there is a time for pain and sorrow...the trick is to know when it is the proper time to let go and move on...and it truly is a battle....I remember waking each new morning for a period of many, many months and the pain was still with me and I would always hope that I would not awaken in the morning and feel the pain again...but I would time after time...still don't know exactly how I got past that pain...probably was a combination of time, wonderful friends, a strong determination to go on, and new relationships...James
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2 posted 2001-10-15 10:34 PM


Really nice, sad though.  Good luck moving on.  

JT

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3 posted 2001-10-16 10:27 AM


very touching.... Hope things turn out better for you.  

Why is it that we prepare for war like precocious giants, and for peace like retarded pygmies.....
             Lester B. Pearson

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4 posted 2001-10-17 07:40 AM


Thanks everyone for your replies  )
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5 posted 2001-10-17 06:03 PM


i liked the rhythm of this,and it's expressiveness well compacted into a short few lines,good work!!

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6 posted 2001-11-01 10:13 AM


Thanx!!!!!!!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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