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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-10-15 10:19 AM




So close,
self-destruction.
Timing, my enemy
wanting to overthrow feelings,
of Doom...


Extinguish the anxiety of tomorrows.
Leave me a conquest, just one...
Let me triumph for a day,
topple the enemy, tip the balance of feel.
And when the Myst settles,
let the warmth of a new day
Reign me forever.


~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-15-2001).]

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Baroni
Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2001-10-15 10:43 AM


Very nice.... painful, but also hopeful.. I really enjoyed it.
Alan
Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499
right next door
2 posted 2001-10-17 10:29 PM


Nt...I am sorry to see you in such pain..but I am glad you can see the hope..This is well written...enjoyed the read
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2001-10-22 07:38 PM


Baroni
Alan ..thank you  both..sometimes that mood swing takes hold..and I write the unexpected..*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2001-10-22 08:32 PM


Oh yes, wouldn't it be nice to have things our way, for just ONCE?? Good write, Maureen.
Take care.
Sandra

cherish
Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
5 posted 2001-10-23 10:17 PM


"tip the balance of feel"
i loved the imagery in that line- wonderful words Wynter. youll get your chance to triumph one day   thanks for this- i enjoyed it very much.


         

"......",said the wise mute.

JT
Member
since 2001-09-28
Posts 69
Arkansas, USA
6 posted 2001-10-23 10:31 PM


Really nice way of putting feelings that I, and so many others, can relate to.  Good job.  

JT

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
7 posted 2001-10-24 02:05 PM


"...write the unexpected..." but beautiful dear wynter...

jwesley

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
8 posted 2001-10-24 02:42 PM


cat...I   would be in  7th heaven if it  ever happened to me...one can only hope... Thank you Sandra

cherish ..happy  my words  brought some feeling *s


JT ...thank you for  reading and your kind words *s

jwesley..I am always "the unexpected..." thank you for your kindness

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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