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alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2001-10-13 01:01 PM

Darkness Bound

Liquid emotion runs free
as darkness makes love to her
black soul tenderly.
No lines between pleasure and pain
when fear has nothing left to gain.
She holds no colors of life,
nothing fades from black to white.
Images of foolish dreams left behind
as she wanders from room to room
in her mind.
Embracing the only comfort found,
walking in darkness bound.

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

[This message has been edited by alibaster (edited 10-13-2001).]

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

1 posted 2001-10-14 12:56 PM

A dark write indeed. I have felt this many a time myself (I'm sure many of us have) You express the feelings very well.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2001-10-15 06:11 PM

I have read this 3 or 4 times already, and I LOVE it! Very nice to see you here, Affy, my friend!

*Jenn*

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

3 posted 2001-10-15 06:52 PM

Thank you both for the nice words, glad that you enjoyed.

Temptress....Welllllll....HHeeeelooooo Nurse!! Been some time hasn't it? I moved to a new house and been busy with that and re-vamping {lol with a wink} my site!! Have missed you my dear friend!

Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

Baroni
Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-10-16 10:30 AM

Wonderful. This poem is full of passion, and the symbolism enhances the images seen... A very good read.

Immortal Beloved
Junior Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 42
the carpathians

5 posted 2001-10-17 06:08 PM

lovely choice of words here,i love your descriptions and smooth writing...i especially liked
"No lines between pleasure and pain
when fear has nothing left to gain."
very interesting....

ammelid

Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar

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