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Lethe
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since 2001-04-10
Posts 36
Blackforrest

0 posted 2001-10-11 07:11 PM



THE LEPER AFFINITY
  
We entered Winter once again
Naked, freezing from my breath
Neath the lid all limbs tucked away
This coffin is your abode from now
and onwards

Your body is mine to avail
Such a tragic sight you are
Slave under my creed
Spurring me with those tears

I am beyond death
Midst a dreaming affinity
Saving strength now, faint whispers
Come erotic communion in its splendour

Fever mirrored ghosts
Night time consolation, cross the line
Draw murder into art
Sleep inside through days

In the wake of this relief
Shivering, longing for more
Insanity at it's peak
Love me to my death

Lost are days of Spring
You sighted and let me in
Keep the beast inside
Shackled within my hide
Screaming out too late
Losing to my hate
Grew together with your skin
And paced the trails of sin

Your gaze covered with virgin snow
Rigid features
It's the shallow deeds who is to blame
Deafening shrieks pierced the night

A step from oblivion
Moving into the dim lights
Hiding within a reverie
It was worth it for the wait alone
  


  

[This message has been edited by Lethe (edited 10-11-2001).]

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Tracey
Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2001-10-12 07:33 AM


Well written, emotional piece.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2001-10-12 12:30 PM


It's nice to see you back and posting your work...

excellent!

~Tier

Immortal Beloved
Junior Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 42
the carpathians
3 posted 2001-10-17 05:45 PM


Your words are extremely beautiful and the way you put them together is wonderful. I cannot pick a favorite line,it's good from beginning to end,bravo.

ammelid

Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar

Baroni
Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2001-10-17 09:20 PM


Excellent.  Very good poetry, I enjoyed the imagery.
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