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sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
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London, UK

0 posted 2001-10-09 06:03 AM


GONE:

I wanna go home
I wanna go back
To the time of innocence
Of painless lack

Is it better to have loved and lost
Is it a punishment to count the cost

Now is forever
And I want to die
You walked out on me
Without even a goodbye


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with you
1 posted 2001-10-09 10:09 AM


ohhh....this is so painful and sad. I hope you are ok. (((hugs)))
allis4angel
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since 2001-04-10
Posts 82
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2 posted 2001-10-11 06:13 PM


sgreybe,
Sorry about it.
You're not alone on that.
Keep writing.

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
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3 posted 2001-10-20 10:16 PM


Oh wow I know how much this hurts--great expressions--LOVE ELMO  
cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
4 posted 2001-10-20 10:35 PM


"Now is forever"

i hate it when a relationship ends- the way you put it makes it sound so absolute . thanks for sharing this sylvia, im sure there are many of us who can feel with you- i know i certainly can! i hope things get better for you soon *hugs*. thanks for sharing

see the glass crack like a flower opening


       

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