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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-10-08 08:30 PM

One day
when the bitterness
of these times are past
I'll remember the foolishness
of my own treacherous heart
& savor the taste
of my own tears...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-10-08 09:50 PM

to perhaps know again
the soft smiles
and tender touch
of one who
waited

and still
waits outside
the walls of
my heart. . .

sorry. . . just a little inspiration. . .

well done. . . but sad. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

sgreybe
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 209
London, UK

2 posted 2001-10-09 05:56 AM

Tiersdin

My dear friend, what pain is read here. Sorry for the hurt you've been caused. All I can say is keep on keeping on. It might help to know someone cares.

*hugs*

Sylvia

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-10-09 05:52 PM

Like this...hope that day comes soon...James

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2001-10-09 08:57 PM

Hugs for you, Tiersdin. Such a sad tale but with a hope there for it to improve.

Dee

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-10-10 09:42 AM

very powerful impact this has.......

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

6 posted 2001-10-10 07:34 PM

sven:  Thank you for such a wonderful poetic reply. *smiles*

sylvia:  *hugs* thank you so much for such a kind comment. It is deeply appreciated.

James: Thank you, I'm glad that you liked the poem...

Dee:  It was written a while ago... the pain is a lot less these days. Thank you for reading...

sea: Thank you for commenting...

*smiles*

~Tier

allis4angel
Member

since 2001-04-10

Posts 82
Portugal

7 posted 2001-10-11 06:16 PM

Tiersdin,
I liked this one.
A few words saying it all.
Just hope you're right about it.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

8 posted 2001-10-12 05:39 AM

This is very very good...
~Connie~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

9 posted 2001-10-12 07:40 AM

The emotion speaks loud and clear in these few words.

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

10 posted 2001-10-13 01:57 AM

This was really good for so few words.

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

11 posted 2001-10-14 01:08 PM

The hurt and pain you were suffering in this poem is very clear. You spoke your feelings well. good job!
LadyPeach1

Baroni
Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

12 posted 2001-10-15 10:53 AM

I'm awestruck. This poem is so meaningful, yet so concise. Masterful.

JT
Member

since 2001-09-28

Posts 69
Arkansas, USA

13 posted 2001-10-15 10:36 PM

Wow! You've said a whole lot in just a little space. Good job.

JT

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