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Joie de Vivre
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since 2001-09-29
Posts 21
USA

0 posted 2001-10-06 04:29 PM


his face covered
within a helmet
still identified
by his smile

the man she hunted
in her reach
longing to put an end
to her frustration

she takes his place
removing the shield
veins filling with blood
as her arms raise

in victory
she dons the metal face
as the dreamer falls
adjusting to the role

rusty panic
fitted for a man
this pattern weaves
her creation

the place in ruin
as the dreamer ascends
her fallen lover
dead in fantasy

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Tracey
Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2001-10-07 01:59 AM


her fallen lover
dead in fantasy

Strong ending here. Well written piece.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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