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Dee
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0 posted 2001-10-04 09:34 AM


Does he really exist,
this man who touched my heart?
The one who wanders
through my mind,
showing me things
I never dreamed
were possible.
He is the arms
that lift me
when I fall,
the lips
that kiss away
my tears,
the eyes
that watch over me
when I sleep.
He is the man
who comes to me
in my dreams.
He is part of me now
and I love him as such.
Or is he a dream,
a spectre
in my reality?
Someone I created
in my need
to be loved.

[This message has been edited by Dee (edited 10-04-2001).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-10-04 11:56 AM


I'd much prefer him to be real   he's out there Dee........big hugs to you  
Midnitesun
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2 posted 2001-10-04 02:09 PM


Sometimes, dreams come true.
Hope this one does for you.

Dee
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3 posted 2001-10-04 05:51 PM


Thanks Sea and Midnitesun, I'm sure he is out there somewhere. I just need to hear from him.

Dee

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-10-04 07:02 PM


Lots of men want to be loved also...and to share kisses...so you have a good shot at it...James
Dee
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5 posted 2001-10-04 08:24 PM


Thank you James. Glad you stopped by.

Dee

Tracey
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6 posted 2001-10-04 08:49 PM


I hope he really does exist for you. I hope this dream comes true. Funny, how sometimes somebody takes a piece of our heart, and just won't give it back dammit.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Dee
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7 posted 2001-10-04 08:52 PM


Yes it is funny. Like we wouldn't miss a little bit of our heart  

Dee

JT
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8 posted 2001-10-04 10:39 PM


I thought this was really good but where everyone else took it to be longing for a guy, I was thinking more of a questioning the reality of a guardian angel or spirit guide you believe is with you.  I may be completly off track as to what you meant but that's one of the cool things about a good poem, everyone gets something different out of it.

JT

Dee
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9 posted 2001-10-05 04:42 AM


JT
I love your interpretation of my poem. It isn't what I was thinking but I can see it in there now you have pointed it out. The man this is for is like a Guardian Angel to me. He looks after me, worries about me and kicks my bum when I need it too.     And I love him dearly (just don't tell him  )
I just don't see him as often as I would like to hence the "does he really exist".

Dee

[This message has been edited by Dee (edited 10-05-2001).]

EagleOne
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10 posted 2001-10-05 06:49 AM


I understand these feelings all too well my friend, you take care!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


Dee
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11 posted 2001-10-05 06:59 AM


Thanks Eddie, I knew you would.

Dee

Lone Wolf
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12 posted 2001-10-06 12:45 PM


Don't give up, Dee.  You'll find him someday.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Dee
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13 posted 2001-10-06 03:53 AM


Thanks Lone Wolf. I have found him, I just keep losing him.

Dee

kitkat
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14 posted 2001-10-06 12:39 PM


Oh this poem touched home for me..I too once had that same dream. Trust me when I say Dreams do come true..I have Proof!!! Living happily with my Dream Man. He (your Dream) will appear before you when you lest expect it.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

Dee
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15 posted 2001-10-06 06:31 PM


Thanks for reading kitkat. Glad it meant something to you.

Dee

Parker
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16 posted 2001-10-08 12:44 PM


I think he exists. If he's in your heart, then he's real. Life just has a way of interfering with these connections. Just keep him in mind.  

Parker

Dee
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17 posted 2001-10-08 06:29 AM


Parker, I do keep him in mind...a lot   I know he will be back one day I just have to be patient.

Dee

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