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boardman
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since 2000-05-09
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0 posted 2001-10-03 11:00 PM


Am I Here?

Where is my head as I climb through the slate window?
My mind is ringing like an unbalanced line.
Is there a condenser mic for all to hear?

I think not.

Something is twisting the stick in the knot again.
I feel the pain on a molecular level.
Can I see it through?

I think not.

Why are they pulling the strings?
I will escape into the black hole hiding in that secret place.
I feel the heat once more from the searing rays.
But can they hear the voices?

I think not.

It’s time again to light up my dreams with the fire from Tesla’s creation
Nobody will know.
I can slide right by and melt into the 6th dimension.

Do you want to come?

I am in great need of an upgrade.
I must rebuild the cells frozen from ions ago.
You can’t miss me because you don’t know if I am here!

If I think then I am. Am I?


"Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman

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Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-10-04 02:13 PM


"But I could've told you, Vincent
this world was never meant for one
as beautiful, as you"

This, from Don Mclean's "Starry starry night"  tribute to Van Gogh. You are here, and so was he.
That's the only truth we know for sure.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-10-06 01:15 AM


Nice use of repetition here, boardman.  Intriguing write.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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