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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
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Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2001-10-02 10:25 PM


I fell in love
So hard and true
The day I laid
First eyes on you

Your vision caught me
By surprise
It calmed my soul
And soothed my cries

Your gentle tremble
To my touch
I want some more
And miss so much

So until the next time
You're with me
An angel dream
Is what you'll be

G. A. Webb

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


© Copyright 2001 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2001-10-02 11:31 PM


Lovely write. I hope Angel Dreams come true for you

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-10-06 01:16 AM


May all your dreams come true, G.A.  Nicely done.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2001-10-07 02:18 AM


Angels do smile upon us from time to time!!!!
Sweet one Mr Webb!!!!  

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



sonjes
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since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
4 posted 2001-10-07 07:14 AM


I really enjoyed reading this one. Left me wanting so much more for the writer. Excellent work.

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
           -Enigma


EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
5 posted 2001-10-08 06:57 AM


An angel dream, what a lovely thought!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


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with you
6 posted 2001-10-08 07:09 PM


aww...this is soooo sweet.   I just love this  
Tiersdin
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7 posted 2001-10-08 08:02 PM


excellent writing...

~Tier

qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
8 posted 2001-10-08 10:13 PM


This is cute--I love how it makes me wanna   LOVE ELMO <3
G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
9 posted 2001-10-10 10:20 AM


Thank you all, I'm glad you liked this piece, though I don't believe it to be one of my better pieces. I feel like it's missing something. But it'll do, after all it's only wishful thinking. Thanks again.  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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