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JT
Member

since 2001-09-28

Posts 69
Arkansas, USA

0 posted 2001-09-29 10:52 PM

WHEN LOVE DISAPPEARS

Have you ever loved someone so much that you hated them?
Have you ever hated someone so much that you loved them?
and you realize that love and hate are not polar opposites,
but a small part of a huge puzzle that no one's ever
completely finished.
To truly experience love means never having to deal with fear.
No fear of unfaithfulness.
No fear of betrayal.
No fear that one day the love you feel will fade.
No fear at all.

There's a feeling that feels like you're falling down a hole.
A feeling that can be exhausting to the soul.
A feeling that can make you burst out into tears.
When love disappears.

There's a time and a place when your world can rip in two.
A time when solace can't be found no matter what you do.
A time when you realize all your darkest fears.
When love disappears.

Sometimes at your weakest moment,
something wonderful can happen.
And sometimes at your most joyful moment,
devastation can hit.
But keep it together, don't let your fears win you over.
Stay true to yourself and never quit.

You never really have to go and close down your heart.
Sometimes an ending can really mean a new start.
Sometimes it's all right to let your life switch gears.   When love disappears.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-09-30 02:20 PM

indeed it is alright. . .

great job, there's a lot going on here, it's good to get all of it out. . .

welcome to Passions, and to Dark Passions, please take a look around, and I'll be looking forward to more from you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

2 posted 2001-09-30 08:07 PM

I like this--Welcome to Passions, hope you find a home here

LOVE ELMO

sonjes
Senior Member

since 2000-02-18

Posts 564
North Carolina

3 posted 2001-09-30 08:57 PM

A very warm welcome to Passions.

Great job on your first post.

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

4 posted 2001-09-30 10:08 PM

Allow me to welcome you to Passions also. And there is wisdom in your poem. Life will always take new directions, we just have to be bold enough choose those new paths when they appear.

And I lie here in bed all alone- I can't mend
And I fear tomorrow will be okay
- Staind

JT
Member

since 2001-09-28

Posts 69
Arkansas, USA

5 posted 2001-09-30 10:36 PM

Thank you very much for your input. I have read several poems in this forum and think you guys are really good and have a good thing going here. I hope to spend a lot more time here.

JT

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-10-02 01:57 PM

Truely a great job on this one JT..i really enjoyed it...keep up the awesome work!

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

7 posted 2001-10-02 09:17 PM

Lots of good advise within your poem. Enjoyed reading it.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

8 posted 2001-10-02 11:29 PM

Have you ever loved someone so much that you hated them?

Yes, I have. Scary feeling. Well written poem for such dark thoughts. Welcome

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-10-03 04:21 PM

Enjoyed your feelings about love...it doesn't hurt as much if we keep in mind that we don't own love...it comes and goes as it pleases...James

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-10-06 01:18 AM

Powerful poem, JT. Many can relate to the feelings described here I'm sure. I know I sure can. Failed love is like someone ripping the rug out from under you. You didn't expect it and have no clue as to which way to go.

Welcome to Passions!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

JT
Member

since 2001-09-28

Posts 69
Arkansas, USA

11 posted 2001-10-07 11:03 PM

thanks to all of you who replied. I really appreciate the nice things you've said.

JT

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

12 posted 2001-10-08 08:00 PM

Very good advice...

enjoyed reading!

*smiles*

~Tier

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