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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2001-09-27 12:09 PM


No one's aware
And fewer can see
The heart that I share
Or the love that's in me

It's all but a waste
These feelings sublime
The victories I've chased
Mean nothing in time

I've worked so damn hard
Throughout all of my days
Yet still my heart's barred
From love's brilliant gaze

What is the point
I just fail to see
Only pain will anoint
The loneliness in me

Alone as I stand
The future's so bleak
With no helping hand
My heart becomes weak

Isolation has trapped
My soul in it's web
My strength has been sapped
Now I'm caught in the ebb

G. A. Webb

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


© Copyright 2001 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
Jonas
Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon
1 posted 2001-09-27 06:01 PM


I can relate to this. I'm almost 40 and I'm still searching for that one special woman, and losing hope in the process. Great work!

And I lie here in bed all alone- I can't mend
And I fear tomorrow will be okay
- Staind

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2001-09-27 09:20 PM


Oh hon I care that you are stuck in the mire, and others here in Passions do too!  But as for finding that special someone you have to live your life in the meantime, do not become isolated waiting for her..
Get out, try new things, isn't there something some hobby or something you've always wanted to try eg. Photography or painting or something?  Get out and try it for yourself and who knows you might meet someone in the process.
Life isn't about having a partner or not, it's what you do with your life everyday...
If you wanna talk please email me at
Isiswarriorprincess@telstra.com.au

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



Tracey
Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
3 posted 2001-09-27 10:52 PM


A write full of emotion. May you find what you're looking for.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2001-09-30 08:20 PM


Yes it sux being alone, I know this first hand,   keep busy & it will be alright--lol--This is great   LoVE ELMo
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