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allan
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since 2000-04-09
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On the road

0 posted 2001-09-26 08:17 AM



when the missiles soar
in eyes blood red roar
look down at your hands
designed to feel, explore

when the bullets rip
blood runs from the lip
look deep into your heart
made for love and spirit soar

when bone breaks at the core
blood running from every pore
look into the eyes of the dead
for it's mercy they implore

justified anger for blood and gore
hatred and fear, patriotic lore
is killing and more killing correct
is this the way to even the score?

[This message has been edited by allan (edited 09-28-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Allan Tierney - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-09-26 02:49 PM


Yes they must be held accountable...the part that is not right is for innocents to suffer...James
Sven
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2 posted 2001-09-26 07:24 PM


I've been asking myself that same question. . .

well done. . .

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allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
3 posted 2001-09-28 08:26 AM


thanks both

may terrorism, intolerance and misguided paternalism ALL end soon...

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2001-09-30 08:14 PM


This is great--I agree--Two wrongs don't make a right & more innocent people shouldn't have to hurt, but I do believe something must be done, it can't just be left ignored!   LOVE ELMO
JT
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since 2001-09-28
Posts 69
Arkansas, USA
5 posted 2001-10-01 10:41 PM


Very good.  We need messages like yours now more than ever.

JT

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