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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2001-09-26 07:54 AM


Empty Dreams


I wake with just a thought
The scent of you, still it lingers
The warmth, body and soul
I reach through the twilight of my dreams
Longing for that briefest touch
Finding only emptiness
Residence now to my barren dreams
These voided memories
Where you once dwelled

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-09-26 10:14 AM


EagleOne~
This breaks my heart~
Sending you the biggest *Hug*
Love ya'~
~*Marge*~

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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-09-26 03:41 PM


Very sad thing to suddenly find ourselves alone...James
Sven
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3 posted 2001-09-26 07:23 PM


to find those thoughts. . .

well done. . .

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EagleOne
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4 posted 2001-09-27 05:52 AM


Marge ~ There's nothing like a big hug to help hold one's heart together. I thank you my friend, take care!

James ~  it takes some getting used to that's for sure.

Sven ~ I seem to spend a lot of time in search of my thoughts, thanks for stopping by.

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


Dee
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5 posted 2001-09-27 06:07 AM


A thoughtful but sad write Eddie. Hugs for you.

Dee

EagleOne
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6 posted 2001-09-27 06:41 AM


Dee ~ Thank you my friend,  you take care!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


Tracey
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7 posted 2001-09-27 10:55 PM


Heartfelt write. Beautiful words for a sad subject.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

G. A. Webb
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8 posted 2001-09-27 11:47 PM


I know this...all too well. I hope for your sake that it's just a good write and not reality. But if it is reality, I feel for you my friend for I reside there as well. Good job.  

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


EagleOne
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9 posted 2001-09-30 01:52 AM


Tracey ~ 'twas a sad time! I appreciate you adding  your thoughts, thank you.

G. A. Webb ~  Sadly it is reality and I know far too many of us know this feeling    Sad too that you know it as well, you take care!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


Isis
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10 posted 2001-09-30 07:29 PM


Ah the lonliness of an empty dream but beautifully expressed none the less!
*hugs* from an Aussie mate...

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



Isis
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11 posted 2001-09-30 07:30 PM


Ah the lonliness of an empty dream but beautifully expressed none the less!
*hugs* from an Aussie mate...

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



qtpieelmo
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12 posted 2001-09-30 08:02 PM


I hate being alone--so I can symphasize-- I like this one   LOVE ELMO
EagleOne
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13 posted 2001-10-01 02:46 AM


Isis ~ Thank you, and thank you!  

qtpieelmo ~ there are many types of loneliness, glad you enjoyed.

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


The Lady of Shallot
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14 posted 2001-10-05 05:35 PM


I felt this one!
EagleOne
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15 posted 2001-10-05 09:56 PM


The Lady of Shallot ~ It is good to know the reader can "feel" my words, thank you!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


Lone Wolf
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16 posted 2001-10-06 12:43 PM


Very sad write, my friend.  I can so relate to these feelings.  ((HUG))  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

EagleOne
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17 posted 2001-10-06 05:20 AM


It saddens me that you can relate my friend. Hugs to you to, take care!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


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