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Sven
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0 posted 2001-09-25 07:24 PM


to you Goddess of my Heart
I come seeking forgiveness

forgiveness for the anger
forgiveness for the pain
forgiveness for the loss
for the things that I've caused
and for the things that I will cause

to you Mother of my Soul,
I offer my heart once more

a heart that has known pain
a heart that has known loss
a heart that has known loneliness
these are the feelings that I ask
be taken from me
so that the healing might begin

these are the things that I ask
these are the things that I pray

heal my heart
heal my soul
and let me bring healing
to those who weep
so that I might be
an extension of you

the light of your heart

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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1 posted 2001-09-25 11:30 PM


You and the Goddess write beautifully together dear Sven.  As always your writing of Goddesses has a magickal twist and lilt to it.  Beautiful.  Perhaps you should publish a complete Goddess poetry book????
You'd be a millionaire - I'm sure.....
Thanks for another little light in my day.

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-09-26 02:06 AM


Yes let the healing begin...James
Tiersdin
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3 posted 2001-10-15 07:33 PM


I think it has begun!

Beautiful!

here's to miracles & blessings!

~Tier

Isis
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4 posted 2001-10-15 09:38 PM


And after yesterday we can both clearly see it has begun my friend..
And reading this again, it is fitting and simply beautiful!!!!

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



Alan
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5 posted 2001-10-17 10:31 PM


Sven..this is as beautiful as it is graceful.well done sir..
catalinamoon
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6 posted 2001-10-22 08:31 PM


Yes, to all the other comments. Just beautiful. And healing is so needed these days.
Peace
Sandra

cherish
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7 posted 2001-10-23 10:20 PM


awwwwwwwwwwwww (((jumps sven with a huge hug)))...brought a peaceful smile to my face john. anger is felt, so is loneliness and pain, but we'll open our hearts to heal in the warmth of light. thanks for this so much, poet, i loved the read  


         

"......",said the wise mute.

alibaster
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8 posted 2001-10-24 09:32 AM


All I can say is...
simply beautiful!!
Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

Skyfire
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9 posted 2001-10-24 06:36 PM


Wow. Awesome! I'm speechless!
sunshinemist
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10 posted 2001-10-24 06:44 PM


Sven, Very lovely write. Enjoyed!!  

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

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