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Dark Poetry #3

My Occasional Love

Count Barkula
New Member

since 2001-09-07

Posts 7

0 posted 2001-09-24 05:20 PM

I'm not sure that this makes any sense. But here goes..
I love you sometimes, or maybe
On occasion for a moment
I miss you

Mostly I don't want to, or you
When you're here
I don't know

I'm always lonely, or afraid
Of being alone forever
Or never...

In love at all, but happy
On occasion, sometimes or maybe
Always on my own

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

1 posted 2001-09-25 09:17 AM

First--Welcome to DP

Oddly this somehow makes sense to me--I had to read it twice but I really like it!--I love how this is written--When I'm with my bf sometimes I don't really want to be with him, but when he's gone I wish he was there, I hope that makes sense, that's what I got out of it

LOVE ELMO

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (edited 09-25-2001).]

Apachecat906
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 217
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2001-09-25 11:22 AM

Hello and Welcome! Finally I can welcome someone cuz I'm not brand new! Anyway, I liked your poem, it sounded just like the weird meandering of my never-satisfied mind. Thanks for sharing!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-09-25 07:14 PM

this makes perfect sense to me. . .I've had these kinds of feelings. . .

welcome to Dark Passions. . . I hope to see more of your work here. . .

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