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TeChNo KiTtY
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since 2001-09-20
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Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2001-09-23 05:33 PM


searching for the rainbow's end,
stumbling through clover.
i don't believe you're really gone,
and yet you say it's over.

you tell me you've found someone new,
i almost see her face.
she's who you've been looking for,
i guess she took my place.

it's her you hold as you fall asleep,
how come it's not me?
i refuse to believe you don't need me now,
i suppose i'll never see.

so blindly i'll keep running,
chasing the rainbow's end.
avoiding the truth, and nursing..
a heart that will never mend.

"i tried so hard, and got so far..but in the end, it doesn't even matter.."
~Linkin Park

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-09-23 08:31 PM


sometimes. . . we have to mend the heart on our own. . .

well done. . . I liked the rainbow metaphor here. . .  

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Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
2 posted 2001-09-23 09:03 PM


If you find where the rainbow ends, let me know too okay?
Beautifully written.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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3 posted 2001-09-23 10:02 PM


Wow--did you read my heart?--This is exactly what it's sayin--Well written   LOVE ELMO
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2001-09-23 11:59 PM


Time heals all wounds, even though it feels as though it will always ache to think of love etc.

Well versed, describing how any of us have felt after such a betrayl..

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



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