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Dark Poetry #3

Dummy way of living

allis4angel
Member

since 2001-04-10

Posts 82
Portugal

0 posted 2001-09-20 04:50 PM

Same place
Chair, keyboard and me
Same dark
Cigars, coffees and silence

Same dreams
Wishes, hopes and you
Same doubts
Pain, sadness and tears

Same dummy way of living
Since you came into my life
Making me forget
Life is more than you

TeChNo KiTtY
Junior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 22
Wisconsin, USA

1 posted 2001-09-20 08:52 PM

nice work...i know i can definately relate.

"i tried so hard, and got so far..but in the end, it doesn't even matter.."
~Linkin Park

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-09-21 08:02 AM

This was an excellent poem..i too can relate to this a lot...great job!

allis4angel
Member

since 2001-04-10

Posts 82
Portugal

3 posted 2001-09-21 12:13 PM

Thank you both for your comments.

I think you know how your words are always welcome helping to "forget".

Thank you.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-09-23 02:13 PM

indeed life is more than just that. . . and words do help. . .

thank you for sharing them. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-09-23 09:05 PM

Very nice poem. I too can relate to the sentiments here

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Count Barkula
New Member

since 2001-09-07

Posts 7

6 posted 2001-09-24 05:21 PM

I like it.

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