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TeChNo KiTtY
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since 2001-09-20
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0 posted 2001-09-20 01:36 PM


Emptiness burns within me,
Searing my insides,
Leaving behind blackened heartache...and charred remains of trust.
Memories of misused love scatter the feathery ashes.
Hollowness comsumes me, blinding me with darkness.
Tiny flames of what might have been gently flickering, licking at tender thoughts..
Threatening an inferno of scorching pain.


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1 posted 2001-09-21 08:05 AM


First off...WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

Your first post was wonderful...it was full of emotion and thats great!! i cant wait to see more from you..keep em comin!

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-09-21 08:59 AM


Yes...James
TeChNo KiTtY
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3 posted 2001-09-21 12:56 PM


thanks to the both of you  

"i tried so hard, and got so far..but in the end, it doesn't even matter.."
~Linkin Park

allis4angel
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4 posted 2001-09-21 04:19 PM


I like this one.
Sad, but beautiful.

Enchantress
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5 posted 2001-09-21 08:25 PM


This is great!  Done with such feeling.  Welcome to Passions!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

qtpieelmo
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6 posted 2001-09-21 10:11 PM


Hey Welcome to DP   Hope you'll stay & make this your 2nd home like I have-- LOVE ELMO
Alan
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7 posted 2001-09-22 12:40 PM


welcome to passions...this is a great start..
alan

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8 posted 2001-09-22 11:10 AM


hello, and welcome. . .  

this indeed showed a depth of those feelings. . . well done. . .

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