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Dark Poetry #3

There were no warnings

allis4angel
Member

since 2001-04-10

Posts 82
Portugal

0 posted 2001-09-06 04:19 PM

There were no warnings visible
When I choose you
From that long list catalogue
Where your name was the only option

There were no weapons around
When our eyes first met
And you became my angel
Supposing you would never hurt me

There were no stones threatening
In your words and laughs
When your voice became the song
I choose to hear all the time

There was no maliciousness
In your hands and eyes
Nether in your skin and hair
When I first became your prisoner

There were no reactions against
When I gave up from everything
Betting all in you and putting you so high
Before everything and everybody

There were no warnings
So I don’t understand you
And these paining wounds all around
How could I know?

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

1 posted 2001-09-06 06:32 PM

Sometimes things happen so slowly... You don't even notice... Good Write... Hope all is well with you
~Connie~

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2001-09-06 11:17 PM

allis, sometimes we are blinded by love, and we don't want to see the warnings, very good write.

allis4angel
Member

since 2001-04-10

Posts 82
Portugal

3 posted 2001-09-07 06:12 AM

Zinsser and Rosebud1229,
Thank you both for your comments.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

4 posted 2001-09-08 12:36 PM

A painful write, well done!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

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