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Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2001-09-05 11:28 AM

Trapped

Trapped in a world you no longer desire
In a world suffering from love deprivation
The heart has lost its fire
The mind is besieged with frustration

Longing for salvation
Delusional satisfaction sets in
Feeling at home with my aberration:
As desperation starts to win

I exile myself to self-imposed isolation
I give in to my minds wants and desires
For self mutilation
As peace I try to acquire

icyheart
9-05-01

G. A. Webb
Member

since 2000-01-21

Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

1 posted 2001-09-05 11:32 AM

Oh how I know that feeling. I know it all too well. Nicely done my friend and good luck to you as well.

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2001-09-05 07:22 PM

Very Good write....
Please don't use pain to cover the pain tho...
~Connie~

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

3 posted 2001-09-05 08:24 PM

G..thanks..

Connie...thank you. Just don't worry to much I put my knife up awhile back. Besides it kind of fit in good.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2001-09-05 10:14 PM

Alan: I am glad to hear it & yes it did fit in the write well....
Just know a few people into that ...
~Connie~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-09-05 11:34 PM

Strong stuff. Well written. You capture the tortured soul there. Been there...keep going back.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

6 posted 2001-09-05 11:43 PM

So do I Connie..not a prety scene...

Tracey...I am always bouncing back a forth too.

allis4angel
Member

since 2001-04-10

Posts 82
Portugal

7 posted 2001-09-06 04:06 PM

Well written.

"I exile myself to self-imposed isolation"
... loved it ...

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

8 posted 2001-09-06 07:26 PM

Thank you angel...

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

9 posted 2001-09-06 11:20 PM

Alan very powerful words.

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