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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2001-09-05 10:35 AM


I can't stop crying
I can't stop the tears
I see my soul is dying
But I can't stop all the fears
I can't stop the pain
And I don't know what to do
It's driving me insane
Because I can't stop loving you

I can't stop the memories
I can't stop the past
I can't stop the simple fact
For him your love will last
I can't stop the agony
That tears my heart in two
My yearning is a burning
And I can't stop loving you

G. A. Webb

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


© Copyright 2001 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
Alan
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499
right next door
1 posted 2001-09-05 10:44 AM


this is so sad. it does tear you apart when the one you love loves someone else. good luck in your life. great read
alan

Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
2 posted 2001-09-05 12:57 PM


Very well expressed!  Tears help the heart heal, so let them flow.  


Mags

Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon
3 posted 2001-09-05 05:15 PM


I'm in the same place you describe here so well. How do we accept that the place we once held in someone's heart now belongs to another? Very powerful piece you have written.
Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
4 posted 2001-09-05 07:08 PM


I'm so so sorry your haveing to go through this... Beautiful longing in your write..
~Connie~

allis4angel
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since 2001-04-10
Posts 82
Portugal
5 posted 2001-09-06 04:00 PM


Hope you can't stop writing.
Nice read.


Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
6 posted 2001-09-06 11:22 PM


it's very hard when the tears keep falling, but it's the only way, to heal the heart.
very good poem.

G. A. Webb
Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
7 posted 2001-09-08 12:12 PM


I'm not going to comment on the thoughts behind this one other than to thank you all. I'm sorry to hear that some can relate. I wish you the best. Thanks again.  

Oh, and allis4angel, don't worry, I won't.  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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