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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Without her I am nothing Without her I have nothing to give Without her I have no reason to live Without her The end has come Icyheart Sept. 02, 2001 |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
I am not sure if this Poem is true life or not but it reminds me of a saying a good friend once said to me.. " Don't put all your love into just one person, because when that person leaves, your world will crumble apart. Place your love within many people, therefore you have many to lean on if needed." If you have ever forgotten so many people when you begin a new relationship, then you should understand what my friend meant by that! Any ways, good write. Mags |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
A heartfelt, moving piece. Short but emotions fully expressed. May there be light at the end of the tunnel my friend. Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I just finished reading your dance poem, and smiled. Now you are yanking the tears. Hope you are just being creative here, and not as blue as the poem. Kacy |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Kacy...you caught me. I give up. It is just a poem. We had a fight, you know how that is. I took it out on a piece of paper. thanks for reading alan |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
that is so sweet. LadyPeach1 |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
such power in its simplicity...the last lines...wow. if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry- |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I love short poems... Strong Write ~Connie~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Good write....  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
very nice heart felt poem! though i hope its not true?? keep up the good writing! |
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