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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Edge of Loneliness From the shores of past residue I cast my spirit out to sea my dreams are shipwrecked in sorrow in the defeaning silence of vacancy ~ The violent, velvet sky of stale envelops my sails in failure's gray the sands of time void my existence life's waves wash my footprints away ~ No messages in a bottle reaching heaven flooding my heart with tides of tears tossed over the edge of loneliness I drown in the ocean of wasted years ~ Screams shiver with the bleeding horizon as I purge my pain in isolated grief salvation will never be mine even death won't bring me relief By Melissa P. Monette *inspired by Mysteria's poem* "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 08-31-2001).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wow! It just shows I have been away! Hon - how your writing has improved!! This had great imagery - the workx!!! Also seems to me I'm not the only one 'shining'. Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Melissa, you are a wonder. Every time I read you I discover you again. Don't ever stop that wonderful pen.  Parker |
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