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Mirror Mirror

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G. A. Webb
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since 01-21-2000
Posts 442
Stanton, California, USA


0 posted 08-28-2001 01:25 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for G. A. Webb

Mirror mirror
On the wall
Tell me why
It is I fall
For the ones
Who love me not
All the while
My soul will rot

Mirror mirror
Tell me true
What can I try
What shall I do
To keep my soul
From growing cold
Iím all used up
My storyís told

Mirror mirror
Help me please
I beg you now
Upon my knees
You see I just
Canít take no more
My heart is bleeding
On the floor

Mirror mirror
Hear my thoughts
My spiritís trapped
In darker spots
Of this world
Which I call hell
My love is wasted
Canít you tell

Mirror mirror
This canít be
My life is filled
With misery
Please hear the thoughts
That I have said
Please dear mirror
Make me dead

G. A. Webb

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

© Copyright 2001 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
qtpieelmo
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since 07-04-2000
Posts 1008
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY


1 posted 08-28-2001 01:52 PM       View Profile for qtpieelmo   Email qtpieelmo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for qtpieelmo

Wow--That was great--though kinda harsh--but i have felt it before--& u put it into words so beautifully-- LOVE ELMO
Rosebud1229
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since 04-05-2000
Posts 1829
North Carolina


2 posted 08-28-2001 11:17 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

the poem was excellent all except the last line, should read please dear mirror make me live. Believe in yourself!!
Dark Kisses
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since 06-24-2001
Posts 372
Flat lands of Kansas


3 posted 08-29-2001 12:26 AM       View Profile for Dark Kisses   Email Dark Kisses   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Kisses

Mirror Mirror
On the wall
Help me fly
To Greg's call
To hold his hand
Helping him see
I am his friend
Throughout eternity

Very nice write here Mr. Webb.  You know your work puts me in *ahhhhh*!!!!     Now if ya could only see what else you do to me.  Oops    Any ways, LOVE this one!  

Mags
Honeybee
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since 12-26-1999
Posts 5512
Ontario, CANADA


4 posted 08-30-2001 02:24 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


*sighs* If only you knew how much I can relate to such intense emotions.  This is very well expressed and the rhyme and flow is perfect.  I hope that your pain will pass~  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Isis
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since 09-06-99
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Sunny Queensland


5 posted 08-31-2001 01:02 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Oh dear you are down aren't you?
Nothing is so bad as to wish death even if only a fleeting thought... the only thing perhaps - an incurable disease, otherwise no.
Hon, chin up, have faith, your day in the sun will come... you have to believe though, or it won't happen..
*hugs*
Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~


G. A. Webb
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since 01-21-2000
Posts 442
Stanton, California, USA


6 posted 08-31-2001 11:21 AM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for G. A. Webb

Thank you all for your comments. I'm ok, just under alot of stress and very tierd. Thanks again.  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
Posts 419
houston,tx


7 posted 01-16-2012 04:32 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

this poem reminds me of one of mine im crying im dying im screaming inside you should check it out
 
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