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alibaster
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since 2001-07-07
Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2001-08-28 10:22 AM


IN MY LITTLE PLACE

I can smell the must odors
of dead a rotting flowers.
I am here in my little place.
Here with out a face.
I can hear the worms crawl
in my little place, so small.
My eyes are sewn with golden stitch
here in the blackest pitch.
They have touched my cold lips
with their finger tips.
They have said their pathetic prayers
as I have endured all their stares.
I am here in my little place
wishing I could spit in each sympathetic face.
I despise these hypocrites,
"these pathetic little ****s!"
Do not leave your flowers.
Do not speak your words of peace.
Just pass on by
and do not cry.
Leave me to my own demise and decrease.
I am here in my little place.
Here in my coffin lined with lavender lace.
Lower the sod and dirt
for I wish no longer to hear your fake cries of hurt.
I am here in my little place.

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

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leafseranade
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since 2001-07-06
Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA
1 posted 2001-08-29 07:26 PM


Sometimes you just wish they would all stop trying to make you feel better and then make themselves feel better. I also can't stand it when people are fake. Good poem, feelings expressed well!
Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
2 posted 2001-09-04 12:18 PM


Good write!  I think we all have our own little place that helps us feel protected from the world.  I know I have mine.
You expressed it all so well

Mags

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