»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #3
»
No One . . .
| Dark Poetry #3 |
|
No One . . . |
|
|
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
No one hears me cry As I ask the heavens why My voice echoes off walls That may never ever fall No one hears the screams Coming from my dreams They silently reach out As my mind shouts No one hears my plea Someone reach out to me I’ve never felt so alone My heart heavy as stone No one is around To pick me off the ground I shiver and shake My body continues to quake No one can see What’s become of me How my heart aches How much more I can take No one really knows Because it doesn’t show I keep it all inside My secrets I hide No one holds my hand Or writes my name in the sand There is only me The way it’ll always be No one can tell I’ve lived through hell My life was a mess I now confess No one to hear My deepest fear Coming to life Amidst this strife I need someone now Somewhere somehow To listen to my plight In the middle of this night All writing comes |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved | |||
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
someone hears. . . someone listens. . . even when you don't think that they do. . . they're there. . . well done. . . but sad. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
||
xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I agree w/sven...theres always someone listening....it may be the most unlikely person but they are there...::hugs:: |
||
|
Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
As long as you write here, someone is listening. As long as you have friends dear to you and people who care, someone is listening. As long as God is watching your heart, someone always listens.  This is very sad writing, but very effective in its message. Be well. I am many. |
||
|
qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
I like this & i can understand--This is the place to be--We all r listening  LOVE ELMO |
||
|
misscris Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 27Leawood, KS, USA |
it's amazing how we can feel all alone in a crowd...yet everyone i know has experienced that at some point in their life...ironic isn't it? but you know we are all here to listen... misscris |
||
|
Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
wow, this was an awesome poem, I could feel every word you said, it's how I have often felt, but only by the Grace of God, that's the way you'll carry on. |
||
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Indeed we all listen. Sometimes even when you have someone they don't listen, they don't write your name in the sand, they only want what they can take. Similar skin - similar suffering. It's sad but you have to believe and have faith that one day.. things will change.... *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
