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alibaster
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since 2001-07-07
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In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2001-08-27 12:01 PM


I can give you any thing
and know that you won't tell on me.
My hands burn from
touching the sun.
Kill the witch
and throw her screaming head in the ditch.
I only love you because I want
to see you break.
Every thing is fake.
I want some.
There is none.
Kill the witch
and burn her in the ditch.
Give me your all
so I can laugh as you fall.
I want it all.


"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

[This message has been edited by alibaster (edited 08-29-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-08-28 01:09 AM


WoW...there were some strong and powerful emotions in this....nicely done
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State of Suspended Passion
2 posted 2001-08-28 03:29 AM


It seems this is very bitter. I have felt this way recently myself. I love your work.  
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3 posted 2001-08-28 03:30 AM


It seems this is very bitter. I have felt this way recently myself. I love your work.  
Rosebud1229
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4 posted 2001-08-28 11:28 PM


ouch, this really cuts deep, but the poem, great work.
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