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LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04

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0 posted 2001-08-27 07:56 AM

As I watch you lay there and cry,
I sing to you a lullaby,
Wipe your tears off with my shirt,
Sit there motionless and watch you hurt,
Shivers crawl up and down my spine,
Wondering, when will everything be just fine?
Trying to figure out what to do,
Why would it have to be you?
This little girl,
This innocent soul,
Take her heart,
Make it whole,
She ranaway,
Your the one that made her cry,
she fell asleep,
So that she could die.

© Copyright 2001 LadyPeach1 - All Rights Reserved

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1 posted 2001-08-28 01:15 AM

This was absolutely amazing!! i loved it...beautifully written and heartfelt...great job!

Spine Grinder
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2 posted 2001-08-29 06:46 PM

wow, i REALLY like dis one....awesome job.

~death is certain, life is not~
~How can we be friends if everytime I look at you I know thats all we'll ever be~

Dark Kisses
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3 posted 2001-08-31 03:57 PM

I must agree with the rest.... WONDERFUL job!

Mags

Mother_Earth
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4 posted 2001-08-31 10:37 PM

LadyP, it is so hard to watch a loved one in pain. I am sure by just being there, it is a help. Lots of hugs to y'all, ME

Alan
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5 posted 2001-08-31 10:46 PM

This is so sad. It is hard to watch something like this and be helpless to help her. Wonderful write
alan

Zinsser
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6 posted 2001-09-01 07:54 PM

Very Good!!!!

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

qtpieelmo
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7 posted 2001-09-24 08:49 AM

Wow! Great worx!! I felt this one!

LOVE ELMO

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8 posted 2001-09-24 05:05 PM

I could feel this......it's hard to not be able to do anything.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-09-26 02:08 AM

Nice writing...James

LadyPeach1
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10 posted 2001-12-30 07:57 PM

Ah, I am so pleased with all the feedbacks!
Thanks to you all.
Happy New Year!

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