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xEmperorEmber
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0 posted 2001-08-27 12:06 PM


a simple sweet simplicity found on a new level of thought
lingering between impulses
and filtering out all reason
as the seconds flow into pleasure
and time experiences ultimate atrophy
as we forbid ourselves to waste time with words
defying natures scheme
we rise above it all
and send a ripple through the 4th dimension of heaven
and all the angels turn their heads
and shed a tear
just to feel the warmth of your touch
to remind them their god is not dead


© Copyright 2001 Jimi Hendrix - All Rights Reserved
Count Barkula
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since 2001-09-07
Posts 7

1 posted 2001-09-24 05:25 PM


Interesting.
Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
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2 posted 2001-09-28 09:20 PM


Hi Paul  

Crazy Paul....   Anywho, I like it a lot. Very... very much. It's different from your other ones... or else I'm waaay off. But that's oke. You as the "artist" are not obligated to explain... you simply create what you see... however it is that you see it. And you do it all so beautifully... that's why I love you.   Well, that's not entirely why... but you know what I mean. Well, I hope you're doing alright. I'll talk to you later....sometime. You know how it goes...

Love,
ME

Be kind, be true, be bold, be you.

Freedom comes when you learn to live unafraid.

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