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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2001-08-26 11:08 AM



So many questions
Too many concerns
Thoughts are going wild
It's your heart I yearn

This is so wrong
Yet it seems so right
Flames are going high
My feelings taking flight

Wanting to hold you
Knowing you're there
My love has blossomed
There is no compare

What do I do
Where do I go
Lost in these feelings
Yet my heart is a glow

Tell me what to do
I am so lost in your eyes
This can't go on forever
The sun will again rise

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ramrog
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since 2001-08-22
Posts 50

1 posted 2001-08-27 12:39 PM


very nice, but did I miss something?  It doesn't seem dark to me.  It seems happy and hopeful.  That's a good thing too.
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