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RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
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0 posted 2001-08-25 12:46 PM



"Their's are green, our's are green,
we will all be green together"
-Abraham Lincoln


I know now the war is endless
since the sons of the apple eater

Through the Mayan end of 2012 all
these wearying battles are repeated

young, I headstrong sought to slay dragons
which multiply much faster than we

But we all multiply together,
and so the din becomes maddening,

constant, commonplace. In close
proximity we callous to the numbers.

Cain slew Abel was headlines for years,
100,000 Ruwandans and we can't even

look up from our cereal unless
interrupted by a new commercial.

Abraham almost slays his son and
we teach it's righteous lesson,

another whacko hears a voice too,
kills his whole family, we move on.

A thief and murderer is hung like a
scarecrow next to Jesus, he gets heaven,

Another government (texas) kills hundreds
yearly, Jesus' lesson grows scarce.

Soon we'll step over the bodies
and re-adjust our nursery rhymes,

next will be the stench and
our clever unspoken masking.

I've had dogs with more loyalty,
cats with more affection.

Our hate is as subtle as a fart in church,
our outrage as quiet as a rat peein' on cotton.
  

[This message has been edited by RSWells (edited 08-25-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Richard S. Wells jr. - All Rights Reserved
Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
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1 posted 2001-08-25 01:00 AM


very nice and very thought provocing (spelling?).  and sadly very true.
Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-08-25 01:05 AM


Abraham almost slays his son and
we teach it's righteous lesson,

another whacko hears a voice too,
kills his whole family, we move on.

Does make me question...love the title.

citizenx
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since 2001-07-31
Posts 189
motorcade
3 posted 2001-08-26 06:25 PM


Our hate is as subtle as a fart in church,
our outrage as quiet as a rat peein' on cotton.

There is a song that ends "man kills everything" I fear it may be true. Maybe we have lying to ourselves all this time, maybe we are murderers at heart. It is sad to think that our history our nations are build not just on the sweat of hard larbour but  bloodshed. Much to think about. enjoyed the read.



ramrog
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since 2001-08-22
Posts 50

4 posted 2001-08-27 12:31 PM


Obviously well thought out.  It makes one think.  Unlike the other replies, however, I disagree with the point.  I applaud your thought provoking prose, though.
LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

5 posted 2001-08-27 07:48 AM


Wow! That poem spoke it all! Great job.
LadyPeach1

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2001-08-29 07:09 PM


It's a crazy world my friend.  Loved the last paragraph, seems to me to sum it all up perfectly.
Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



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