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Dark Poetry #3

death of a camel

silent whispers
Junior Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 40
Alaska

0 posted 2001-08-23 06:22 AM

You stared into the flames to long
got caught up in its sulferous power
inhaled the lacy strings that bind
each of us together, forever.

Your life went up in a puff of smoke
yellowed, ashen complexion of life
never thought you'ld melt so quickly
just a leftover snowball in July.

Inside the light you lose its edges until pushed

Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.

1 posted 2001-08-23 01:18 PM

I enjoy the death of a Camel about thirty times a day. Mmmmmm....smooth! *cough*

Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

2 posted 2001-08-23 07:56 PM

I never let my camle die, i dont know what is wrong with you ppl. but anyway, i liked this although i am not sure if it is about a person, an object, or the camel on the side of my pack of smokes.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY