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samt
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 52
Brisbane

0 posted 2001-08-22 05:52 AM



Damm girl, I am so close
I could go in five and touch your tender skin
but I must control these feelings deep inside
for I know in my heart I am the one
I sit and ponder if my decision is right
but if it is meant to happon
it simply will
although everything happons for a reason
nothing is meant to happon
it either does
or it doesn't
only the wind will blow

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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2001-08-22 09:19 AM


I like this--it is the way I often think--but I'm wondering now if I was wrong--great work--LOVE ELMO  
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-08-22 03:12 PM


Nice expression...kind of reflects on the mystery of why some seem to awaken all of our senses...James
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