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Isis
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0 posted 2001-08-21 07:28 PM


There must be a sign on my head,
That says use me, take advantage,
She'll do it all,
And you don't have to pay homage!

I do it all now,
I cannot do another thing,
I sleep like the dead from exhaustion,
And only more conflict it brings.

Then when ill or unable,
I let everyone down,
It's my JOB to do all this,
With the painted on face of a clown.

But I too am weak!
Other times I'm weary!
I resent having to work like a trojan,
Don't you get it deary?

I do my share and then some,
And what a thankless task,
Yet you barely lift a finger,
When it's something that I ask.

Perhaps I'll go on strike,
Then when NOTHING is done,
You may finally see the light,
When our whole existance becomes undone.

It's 50/50 here,
Not 90/10,
I'm praying you'll be considerate,
And let this selfishness end.



*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~


[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 08-24-2001).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-08-21 08:25 PM


nicely done... sharing the load is one thing that has to happen if there is to be a relationship that has hopes of lasting with respect... I hope the one that inspired this understand that...


leafseranade
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2 posted 2001-08-21 10:15 PM


hopefuly you will eventually get that equal partnership you've always hoped for.  nicely done poem.
Sven
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3 posted 2001-08-21 10:58 PM


just having this talk with my Mother today Isis. . . and you are so right. . . it can't all be on one side. . .because when it is. . . and expectations set in. . . then you have the problems. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-08-22 03:14 AM


Isis I know when both don't do their part the frustration can build...James
carolinadreams
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5 posted 2001-08-23 05:46 AM


ISIS,

I wish I could be helpful.  You have been such a pure and true godsend to me. hall I try to help ? YES!! Half a world away you kept me from death.  I've gotten the pictures and rights to them, as well as reestablishing what insanely could happen. i climbed that hill with you and yours in my heart and prayers. I'm on my way down now and feel the warmth, I can repay you and yours only with feelings of thanks. I owe you my life, thanks for sharing.

J.L. Koehler

Ginners
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6 posted 2001-08-23 07:59 PM


very nice i liked this alot
Isis
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7 posted 2001-08-24 06:47 PM


Thanks my friends, it's just the thoughtlessness that hurts..but it's nice to know I do have friends out there that know and understand..  
Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



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