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Dee
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since 2000-08-19
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Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-19 04:53 AM


I thought
we had something,
something special.
Just goes to show
how wrong
I could be.
I'm just another face
in the crowd.
You built me up,
made me feel
special.
But
with a few
careless words
it's all gone.
I'm just me,
again,
no one special,
and you are??

[This message has been edited by Dee (edited 08-19-2001).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-19 05:01 AM


Dee~
Well ... you're certainly a pretty 'face in the crowd' !

Hello, sweet lady~
You just try sneaking in here in the wee-small USA hours ! !
Gotcha !

Too sad a write for such a sweet smile, gal~
And you ARE TOO someone SPECIAL ! !
You're a poet and MY friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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Dee
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2 posted 2001-08-19 10:38 AM


Thanks Marge, thats good to know... especially at the moment.  
Just what I need right now is a good friend. (the smile is slowly returning)

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

[This message has been edited by Dee (edited 08-19-2001).]

Professor Gloom
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of Depression
3 posted 2001-08-19 01:29 PM


A specialty, how true,
Particularly, when you,
Perhaps in the mirror of thoughts,
Reflection, of your being,
Detection, of those seeing,
It’s in the self that you’ve brought.
Whom ever, they might have been,
If even, no further word they send,
You remain special for you were sought.


Gloom

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-08-19 02:23 PM


Oh yes my friend Michelle did this for me not so long ago and then she pulled the rug from under my feet...and she is Michelle...James
Parker
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5 posted 2001-08-19 06:40 PM


You could never be just another face in the crowd.... to sweet.  

Parker

Dee
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6 posted 2001-08-20 02:20 AM


Gloom, thank you this is so sweet.  

Whom ever, they might have been,
If even, no further word they send,
You remain special for you were sought.

James, I think we all find this sort at times, I'm just glad the good out number the bad.

Parker, thank you that means a lot to know that I am more than just another face.  

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

qtpieelmo
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7 posted 2001-08-22 09:00 AM


This is great--I've been here b4--This just makes you more special & stronger & makes him less & stupid for giving up someone so great!!   LOVE ELMO
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8 posted 2001-08-22 09:12 AM


and whose face is this
that from the crowd
does seperate itself,
standing in shine
of spirit
waiting in blush
of hope
Whose face indeed
to eyes knowing

hold up mirrored glass
for I think you need
to meet thyself


Dee
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Queensland, Australia
9 posted 2001-08-22 11:43 PM


Elmo, I think you're right.  

Cpat, thank you for that.  

Dee


I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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