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taramw
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0 posted 2001-08-17 09:37 AM


When I started to blossom
you were my sunshine
I reached towards you
and I grew, and I
flowered.

As time wore on
you were my water
So I grew taller
and lovelier, and I
multiplied.

Life became rocky
you were my care
Nurtured, whispers and love
heart withheld, and I
survived.

The wind galed, battered me
you saw me droop
And cry and not be fun all the time
so wind carried away the petals,
and I withered.

~ Tara ~
14/8/01

© Copyright 2001 Tara - All Rights Reserved
Allysa
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1 posted 2001-08-17 02:17 PM


that was a sad poem, to me.  I know how you feel.  It was great.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

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